If it helps, this is how I summed my stuff up in case you haven't read that one yet:
"In the thickest areas, such as the chest plate, it has been proven to reliably stop single hits from every hand held weapon in Rastal service at distances over 25 yards, and can often stop multiple strikes. This plating is backed by a thick fiber weave style armour, which has similarly proven effective at dissipating energy from such hits into less-than-lethal amounts."
Which means it's likely capable of stopping pretty much any bullet at least once, going off my stuff relative to the approved stuff of others (it's just about always bigger). Some stuff, like a pistol (or SMG), or small calibre rifles like a .223 can presumably be reliably stopped multiple times before the armour is too damaged and fails. Figured it makes sense it would be designed to stop my own weapons specifically because of the above mentioned "usually bigger anyway" thing, and because that's something the Rastal would have on hand to test.
Laser-wise, I did single out another race (humans), because Rastal don't use lasers for the most part. I assumed humans were likely about as crude as laser weapons get at the moment (and probably are pretty similar to what RL laser weapons would look like in the next 40 years if anyone bothers to make them), so when I say
"Besides ballistic protection, the polymers used act as very effective heat conductors, causing most laser weapons, such as those in common human use, to have virtually no effect on the wearer unless held in place for extended periods of time."
it doesn't mean the armour is going to consistently prevent Norenfal weapons, which are far ahead of them, from frying you. Without knowing the specs, it's hard to say, but it's likely the Rastal would design something specific to humanity anyway as they are a potential rival. We kinda talked about lasers in the IRC the other day, so hopefully that makes sense to ya.
Bodyglove-wise, I went even more vague:
"this system provides some of the best protection available from soft armour, though the soldiers to which it is issued still rely primarily on the carapace component to protect from high velocity, large calibre projectiles. Due to the conductive properties of the contained liquid, the BB Mk. 13 is also capable of offering reasonable protection against laser weapons."
So it's pretty good in so far as soft armour goes, but won't reliably stop most of the rifle rounds the Rastal use by itself.
Anyway, I think what you've got there looks good enough to me. I'd say this is approved.