Yeah, needs work. it has promise, but mabye get together with one of us, spell check, make it a tad more concise, and fix bugs and canon errors. otherwise, looks promising.
This language “discovered” by a single man utilizes “nanotechnology” to create otherwise unobtainable effects like FTL travel unfortunately it is extremely unstable and can blow up or murder most things it is mainly utilized in high class engines and weaponry although it has the potential for creating and engineering life.
ok, this line for one needs a bit of work, like a race that uses this. a race that speaks to their ships to make them fly would be REALLY cool, but all FTL travel doesnt have to be the same way. the Zidian way was actually a side effect of a REALLY big gun, so....
also, the whole Single Man thing needs work. a company named Single Man might work, but just one guy is not realistic for ANY major construction.