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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #15 on: May 12, 2015, 07:07:04 pm »
Ok well i have a single other idea fallen london could be so far away that only sam can travel there due to the correspondence combined with him being the only one who knows the  location would that work?
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #16 on: May 12, 2015, 07:13:34 pm »
Also im building my own mega corp if this gets through The New East Universal Trade Company everyone seems to forget also that i can pay them off with rare and powerful materials or blow up there lawyers head xD Theres also the fact that i could just not tell anyone IC the alternate universe thing isn't known by anyone so you cant steal an unknown tech
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #17 on: May 12, 2015, 07:18:27 pm »
I'm fairly certain I said no alternate universe stuff.
Also, everyone so far has been in traveling distance of eachother and I don't think having one that is not yet can reach everyone else would be unfair. Also where did you say you could blow peoples heads up? Like seriously instanteously killing people is a no either way.

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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2015, 07:20:03 pm »
The blowing peoples heads up was a joke ok can we just pull a no one knows how its made and be done with it
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2015, 07:24:47 pm »
So theres actually only one line about interdimensional stuff which i have changed to the shroom steel approach of no one having knowledge of its production
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #20 on: May 12, 2015, 08:35:44 pm »
Our policy is that until it is good enough that two GMs say it is good to go, it is non canon. So this doesn't count and cannot be used until approved.
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #21 on: May 12, 2015, 08:55:24 pm »
The metals you mentioned earlier appear to be borderline magical without some hard science behind them. Judging by what most other people have created, it would be plausible for a highly advanced civilization to have created the materials you mentioned, but even as genius of a man your character may be, it's just not very feasible.

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To improve on this, I would really love it if you wrote up some background science explaining the unusual properties of the metals, and even some information about how they are made/what makes the production process so special.

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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #22 on: May 12, 2015, 09:27:39 pm »
They pretty much work because of atom sized robots that were discovered and can be used to make powerful affects i think i will build on these ideas at some point
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #23 on: May 12, 2015, 09:32:14 pm »
That is not an explanation of how they do what they do. There needs to be a logical reason for these metals to do what they do and atom sized robots is not really an explanation I'm afraid. It provides no reason as to why these things occur in the metal other then a reason that could be used to do anything.

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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #24 on: May 12, 2015, 09:37:02 pm »
what i can think of right now for scintillack is that the nanites inside it are powerful light bulbs and the outer layer of scintillack is a powerful focus

and for never cold brass is that it picks up solar radiation by have atoms that a placed in such a way that radiation is trapped inside and bounces the particles around producing heat

would these work?
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #25 on: May 12, 2015, 09:38:01 pm »
BTW tell me if i should give up since this seems hopeless  :'(
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #26 on: May 13, 2015, 12:58:05 am »
Definitely not. This has potential.
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #27 on: May 13, 2015, 01:18:34 am »
Definitely has potential, keep going, you could make something great out of this, it just takes a lot of time and you end up having to give up or change a lot of your original ideas, but eventually you realise you've come up with a brilliant idea. Don't forget you're fairly new to this, so you're not quite as practiced at having to do all of this as some people saying no to your ideas are, it'll seem difficult, just stick with it and see it through, take all of those things people say no to and think them through, take those things people said yes to and make them even better if you can.

Perhaps a better idea is to focus on one thing at a time, for now instead of focusing on all three materials, your company and your character, focus on just making Scintillack work, then the NeverCold Brass, finally the Prisoners Honey. Once you've got those ideas approved you can begin using them to develop your company and then finally your character. Remember what I said, take one idea at a time, get it approved, then move onto the next one and keep going.

You'll come up with something absolutely spectacular eventually, you have the potential, just keep working on it.
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #28 on: May 13, 2015, 07:57:48 am »
Definitely has potential, keep going, you could make something great out of this, it just takes a lot of time and you end up having to give up or change a lot of your original ideas, but eventually you realise you've come up with a brilliant idea. Don't forget you're fairly new to this, so you're not quite as practiced at having to do all of this as some people saying no to your ideas are, it'll seem difficult, just stick with it and see it through, take all of those things people say no to and think them through, take those things people said yes to and make them even better if you can.

Perhaps a better idea is to focus on one thing at a time, for now instead of focusing on all three materials, your company and your character, focus on just making Scintillack work, then the NeverCold Brass, finally the Prisoners Honey. Once you've got those ideas approved you can begin using them to develop your company and then finally your character. Remember what I said, take one idea at a time, get it approved, then move onto the next one and keep going.

You'll come up with something absolutely spectacular eventually, you have the potential, just keep working on it.
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Re: 3 new materials a company and a ship
« Reply #29 on: May 13, 2015, 01:50:06 pm »
Ah so this is what the that Google Drive is about.

I think your problem is that you are trying to import magical materials from a game into a scifi RP. I mean nevercold brass is imported by demons in that game!

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