I was hoping Lork-Tech would end up as SiegeWorks main competitor, I'll fix up the lore to include Lork-Tech references.
May the best company dominate the arms market.
But yeah this is pretty well written, I was considering developing a Lork-Tech/SiegeWorks ship, built with the quality of Lork-Tech yet mass produced on the SiegeWorks scale, maybe in lore terms as an agreement to show off the best qualities of both companies.