I don't mean to just ignore stuff you've wrote for the lore, sorry if I have. You're pretty much unquestionably better at writing lore than I am anyway, considering I had to improve SiegeWorks lore off of what you wrote and it's still not as good, but considering everyone has/will have slightly different ideas about the lore I think the best idea is to pool everything together, pick out the good bits and then work them together.