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Need critique on this please
« on: September 02, 2015, 12:16:19 am »


Its unlisted, I just wanted to get it somewhere where I could share it easily. I need advice primarily on video quality, audio quality, and video structure. Audio isn't as big an issue as video quality and structure as I just got a new headset that cuts out a bunch of the annoying shit I used to have. Im a little concerned about quality, the best I seem to be able to get while trying to keep size down is 480P. It's mostly about structure. Should I script things? what should I cut and what should I not cut? I mostly make these videos for friends, but I still want to get some decent quality into them.

Thanks for any advice you guys might have for me.

btw, I know about the jerky movements. It's a result of using a laptop touch pad.
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Re: Need critique on this please
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2015, 01:09:21 am »
Quality is acceptable, 720p is typically preferred though.
Audio seems a little off, but that may just be because I'm using kinda crappy headphones to listen to it, and I'm quite picky about audio as it is.
Structure seems fine, I'm going to make the assumption you watch AlChestbreach? Kinda reminds me of him but with swearing.

Scripted stuff is fine if that's what you want to go for, if you don't think the base game will be interesting enough by itself, you just gotta make sure it doesn't seem too scriped otherwise it's sort of uninteresting.
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Re: Need critique on this please
« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2015, 03:05:10 am »
Thanks Siegelion, I've never heard of Alchestbreach. or maybe I have? I think Wilson mentioned him to me at some point, but I haven't watched any of him yet as of now.
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Re: Need critique on this please
« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2015, 03:40:18 am »
He's pretty much the most popular Youtuber that regularly does Fallout, being compared to him is a good thing.
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« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2015, 08:37:38 am »
A'ight, that was good. Pretty good, but yeah, you reminded me of Alchestbreach from you talking to your ghost companion.
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Re: Need critique on this please
« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2015, 04:31:40 pm »
Watching it over myself, I need to work on the swearing. It's tricky because I don't notice I'm doing it. I'm not doing it for reactions or anything, the swearing is just ingrained into how I speak. I'll work on it.
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Re: Need critique on this please
« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2015, 04:39:46 pm »
Okay, for me the cussing is a non issue, might jsut be me but you didn't say anything that was like 'OH MY GOD YOU JUST SAID A BAD WORD GO TO HELL', but more just you actually talking and being yourself which when I watch vids I prefer the person to be themselves.
Overall it looked like you cut out some traveling which is appreciated, and you kept in the combat which tends to be a good thing. I like that you talk to Crowley, it adds a bit of 'flavor' to the video, or whatever word you prefer to use there. Overall enjoyable to watch, and the quality was a non issue for me, though I'm used to setting stuff to like 240 or so.

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Re: Need critique on this please
« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2015, 06:17:25 pm »
If your speech is more natural with swearing in it then keep it
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