Right on, that looks good. As I mentioned in the IRC last night though, your forward armament has no chance of hurting things as it can only score one hit. Since you have power left to spare, but are at -3 space, I'd maybe suggest dropping two torpedo tubes in there instead, or seeing if you can make due without a forward armament and adding a second shield.
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