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Zion
« on: August 09, 2015, 12:33:49 pm »
Hey look i finally got my character somewhat done xD

Name: Zion
Faction: The New East Universal Trade Company (**** it its now TNEUTC)
Rank: The Boss https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NisCkxU544c
Species: Modified Human (just a plot element technically just human)
Appearance: he wears a trench coat with silk gloves and leather laced boots he wears a hood and a brass mask with two eye holes. Burningly bright light emanates from each eye hole.
Armaments: SHR-14
AGE: 35-40 (by appearance)
SEX: Male
HEIGHT: 6 foot 5
WEIGHT: 200 lbs
EYES: Burning Gold
HAIR: Unknown
SKIN: Unknown
SHIP: Chronos
Strengths: Genius, skilled with weapons
Weaknesses: Completely insane and addicted to Prisoner's Honey
Back story: His story really begins when he woke up in a busy spaceport with rare some hyper advanced materials he had been working after an assassination attempt. He is currently fully acclimatized and ready to finally make The New East Universal Trade Company flourish. For a while before his attempted assassinations he worked as an adviser to some of the most powerful humans gaining knowledge of materials such as shroom-steel and other cutting edge tech.

As usual everything is subject to change
« Last Edit: September 16, 2015, 09:55:50 pm by Tesla »
Release the genetically-engineered mind-controlled mechanical chihuahuas!
Release the mind-controlled super-intelligent rats with self-destruct devices!
Release the invisible berserk vampire squid!
Release the armored insane invisible lemmings!
Release the armored murderous bears powered by atomic energy!
Release the enormous sneaky android poodles!
Release the shape-shifting capybaras with self-destruct devices!
Release the stealthy invisible genetically-engineered manatees that can interface with electronic devices!
Release the angry vampire hamsters!
Release the armored mind-controlled teleporting demonic hippos!
Release the giant supersonic mechanical whales!
Release the minature murderous vampire chihuahuas powered by atomic energy!
Release the radioactive android hamsters that throw blasts of energy!
my army is deployed xD

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Re: Zion
« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2015, 12:39:11 pm »
This looks pretty good for somewhat done, a little more backstory if you can manage it without having to force it in and I think it'd get approved.
Though because his backstory involves other peoples work, like Shroom-Steel, you'd need to get permission before you do anything with their work if it's included in anything you do.
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Re: Zion
« Reply #2 on: August 09, 2015, 12:45:24 pm »
I talked to zaweri and my entire backstory i had was ****ed over due to the no multiple dimensions thing but ill ask zawery again and ill see what i can improve in the backstory okay also IM DA BOSS
« Last Edit: August 09, 2015, 03:33:09 pm by Tesla »
Release the genetically-engineered mind-controlled mechanical chihuahuas!
Release the mind-controlled super-intelligent rats with self-destruct devices!
Release the invisible berserk vampire squid!
Release the armored insane invisible lemmings!
Release the armored murderous bears powered by atomic energy!
Release the enormous sneaky android poodles!
Release the shape-shifting capybaras with self-destruct devices!
Release the stealthy invisible genetically-engineered manatees that can interface with electronic devices!
Release the angry vampire hamsters!
Release the armored mind-controlled teleporting demonic hippos!
Release the giant supersonic mechanical whales!
Release the minature murderous vampire chihuahuas powered by atomic energy!
Release the radioactive android hamsters that throw blasts of energy!
my army is deployed xD

 

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