As a heads up, I edit all of my forum posts incessantly, often after they've been read by anyone who's going to read them, so I'll likely re-edit this shortly to change some stuff around. Might be worth keeping an eye on.
Maybe mark new stuff with a colored dash or something like that?
Thanks again. As I said on steam, it's good information. Exactly what I wanted. I've been thinking about how and what to rewrite/remove all day. I'll bring the second draft here when it's finished. If anybody else has feedback they would like to give, do so. the more the merrier.