Utterly Mad

Alright I'm copying- er... taking inspiration from one thing that Fur did, chapter intermissions. You see there's a lot of time spent traveling in The Highway (no sh1te!), so detailing the routes, the surroundings, etc... would get really fucking boring for both the Author and The Reader. And I personally feel that jumping to a location is way too jarring of a transition. So I decided that the time spent in-between chapters, I'll have one, two, all characters thoughts detailed in a sort of a journal entry, or conversation.

It all just really depends on what I'd think would flow better, and all that jazz. So it just really depends, but traveling in-between chapters will be like a mini-chapter. Chapter, chapter, chapter... chapter chapter, chapter... chapter... Fuck now its sounds weird to say.

Anyway, I'm almost done writing the characters (along side the fuckton of lore I need to send to Symbionic Furaotic), I already had them written out before hand, but I'm making a character sheet (of which only I can see in order for the audience to not know what they act like completely). And the first chapter will be a redone, rehash of the chapter it was before I deleted the original Broke Caravan. So expect much better writing, flow, and eventually that'll come out.


So just watch this thread.