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« Reply #15 on: April 22, 2015, 10:59:08 pm »
The Brothers Muerte and Vida
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Muerte walked into the room in his tank top and jeans and walked over to the couch. As he sat down Vida shook his head and watched as Muerte pulled on his black combat style boots. Muerte looked at Vida for a second before reaching over and picking up the gun on the coffee table.
"So, our friend, he has the sentencia de muerte?" Muerte asked as he put the pistol in his hip holster.
Vida nodded and said "Sentencia de muerte. Payment of ten thousand upon receiving proof."
Muerte nodded, and stood up. On his way out the door he picked up an assault rifle off the rack near the door. It paid to have a gun nearby when you took lives for a living.
Vida was right behind him, and slid over the hood of the car to the passenger side. Muerte started the car as Vida got in and put his seatbelt on. "You know, for a guy who's a hired Asesino you're pretty safety conscious."
Vida looked over at him and pulled on his mask. "Hey, better Vida then Muerte."
The two burst out laughing, and Muerte punched Vida on the shoulder. "Still using that joke amigo?"
Vida smiled under his mask "Why change what's not broke?"
Muerte smiled and hit the gas. It wouldn't be too long until they reached their destination.
-----3 hours later------
Muerte pulled the grenade out of his glove box as the two got out of the car. Works better then a pistol he thought as the two walked towards the mansion. "So this is what witness protection gets you? Eh, I've seen better. Now let's make some pesos."
Muerte pulled the pin and threw the grenade like a baseball through the window next to the front door.
--inside--
The officer inside watched as the grenade flew through the window and bounced off the wall. As it hit the ground and rolled he spotted the smiley face painted on the side of the grenade and the words 'Toque de agonia'. That's when it exploded and the world suddenly turned black. after a second he spotted a man in the mists carrying a scythe
--outside--
Muerte kicked the door open and lifted his rifle to shoot. An officer stepped out from behind a pillar and took a bullet to the neck. "What the fuck? This isn't witness protection!" Muerte said as Vida took out another cop with his pistol.
Muerte took down another two cops before moving into the main room. It was nice, but he prefered his living room where there was always a gun nearby. Vida motioned to the stairs and the two moved to the next floor.
Two cops stepped out of cover and shot Muerte in the chest several times, causing him to fall back onto the ground. Vida took them out with his pistol before reaching down and pulling Muerte up onto his feet. "Damn. At least they always forget about my vest."
"You good brother?" Vida asked, sounding concerned.
"Still in la flor de la vida brother." Muerte asked, retrieving his rifle "Target should be in the next room."
The two walked over to the singular door and took cover on either side of it. Muerte moved and kicked the door open with Vida covering him. They saw the target sitting in a chair and smoking. He didn't even look up to see the men that were going to kill him. Vida lowered his gun and looked at Muerte. Muerte looked at him, and then Vida walked off to leave his brother to handle this. "You want to finish that cigarette or just get this over with?"
The man tossed the cigarette and looked at him. "Seriously, you want anything? I mean I'll still kill you, but I try to be nice to the cooperative ones."
The man sighed and motioned to a drawer. "There's a letter in there. Please just put it in the mail."
Muerte pulled out his pistol and sighed, he hated killing the cooperative ones. He lifted the pistol and made a clean kill. He pulled out his camera and took the photos for proof, then retrieved the man's letter.
As he walked down the stairs he nodded at Vida. "Proof of death." He said as he handed the camera to Vida.
---------------------------AUTHORS NOTES-----------------------------------------------
Okay, so a few things here
So to our Spanish speaking members, I hope I did not use anything offensive or such. I looked up Spanish translations for Death and Life, and used words and phrases I found on eudict. If I used something offensive please tell me so I can replace it, probably with english as it's my native language.
On to why I used Spanish. I'm trying expand what I can use for writing, and I plan on actually learning some new languages(well new to me...) so I can better use them. For this story I got some character ideas, edited them, looked up some info, and then made the final characters of Vida and Muerte(Life and Death respectively according to eudict). I think using other languages could be a useful thing in writing and I'll probably continue to experiment in using it, though probably in a different manner.

 

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