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Re: Need critique on this please
« on: September 02, 2015, 01:09:21 am »
Quality is acceptable, 720p is typically preferred though.
Audio seems a little off, but that may just be because I'm using kinda crappy headphones to listen to it, and I'm quite picky about audio as it is.
Structure seems fine, I'm going to make the assumption you watch AlChestbreach? Kinda reminds me of him but with swearing.

Scripted stuff is fine if that's what you want to go for, if you don't think the base game will be interesting enough by itself, you just gotta make sure it doesn't seem too scriped otherwise it's sort of uninteresting.
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