I enjoy it because space stations are a strange thing. I like them a lot! You know, I didn't get the Leroy Jenkins things until he screamed it. I was like, "Huh, Leroy has been called Leroy Jenkins a lot? Very peculiar..." and despite the dialogue it didn't occur to me until Leroy screamed that into battle. It was a great build up.
Anyways, smol grammar error: "Yeah, that's my name. And if you've been talking to the guys(insertcomma), no (insertcomma), my last name is not Jenkins."
It confused me because I thought he was saying "...know my last name is not Jenkins." like "You should know that." but I see he's saying "No, my last name is not Jenkins."
For something that was just made tonight it's not that bad honestly. I think that the chase scene between the Sec officers and the robbers could've been longer, but that's a minor thing.