Utterly Mad

Overall Vulnus I like your writings. A couple things though.
One:There are very slight grammatical errors such as miss spelling unconscious.
Two: Im not really sure where your stories are going, they seem to have little in common with eachother.
Three: The last piece you wrote felt very cliche. Not necessarily a terrible thing but I didnt understand why someone would hide an operation only to bring up no resistance whatsoever and actually off themselves...just seemed a bit pointless.

Anyhow over all it is alright tho.