Do you mind if I do a part by part review of this? I think that might let me be a bit specific about things that only concern a specific part rather then the whole of it. Figured I'd ask since you put up a review format and might want me to stick to that.
Sounds great! You don't have to use the format if you don't want to, of course. It helps me pull out the most info that I need, but anyways, reading part for part is fine by me. I haven't had anyone do that yet, so it's possible I could get some good insight from reading it like that! So by all means go ahead!
Thank you ~ <3