Utterly Mad

because I took way to fucking long to write this I'm gonna try and have another up tomorrow, then try and do one every other day since I really should do this instead of just doing one then dropping, my apologies.

Part one | Work Space

I could sum this up in a few words: You made me care about fucking office work.

But I actually have details to talk about and for some reason that excites me to no end that I'm getting into office work. Seriously, good job.

Okay so mentioning how the chutes were placed was a good and interesting detail that could have been easily glossed over. And then the paper clip system...oh that got me excited and I have no idea why. That alone made me tense a bit and I felt genuine concern for the character.
I mean, there's not too too much I can talk about here, you gave a lot of good information that made the setting feel a lot better and got me interested. And you got me interested in office work, you glorious person you!

Part One | Reboot

Again, not much to say. You introduced a good...well you know what I mean...character and it was interesting. I really don't have much to say honestly.

Part One | Hard Fall

I found this one the best of this part to be honest. I loved the references(yes there references back in the others but I kind of like Jak the best right now) back and the cliff hanger. You showed us more of his character and introduced two rather mysterious guys who talk about chickens and eggs and things. I really liked it and got a glimpse into more of Jak's character. Overall I liked it.