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Re: PULP - Pulp Fiction Mega-Mash of Genres and Places
« Reply #15 on: September 05, 2015, 11:51:29 pm »
No problem, once I got into it I really enjoyed the read. And I just read Part Three, which appears to only have a part for Amy

Part 3 | Infectious

Okay, so you got my attention and then immediately took the exact opposite direction I was expecting. I was expecting the two friends to talk and Amy to vent, but instead it went into a day dream, or something like that. It was interesting and like I said not at all what I was expecting, and in a good way actually. I really don't have much to say, all around good again but one thing kind of got me.

'There was a quick tug on her hair, and then a strong pool and Amy felt herself slide right into the pool'
Uh, shouldn't 'strong pool' be 'strong pull'? Or am I missing something?

Strange... I remember that being an error a while ago. I thought I fixed that. Fun little pun, though!
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