Utterly Mad

Do you mind if I do a part by part review of this? I think that might let me be a bit specific about things that only concern a specific part rather then the whole of it. Figured I'd ask since you put up a review format and might want me to stick to that.

Okay here goes, Also I didn't think I could really adapt the format you had so I did my best, if there's a different structure you want me to use or any specifics you want me to add then do please tell me.

Spoiler:  Review of Part Zero (hover to show)

Part Zero | Lost Tape
It's interesting to read, but I had trouble initially retaining interest since it immediately jumped into describing the surroundings, which is more then likely just me. Once I did get into it I found it quite interesting, and found the mirror reflection to be interesting. Over all it was good and I can't really find much bad with it. though I have to ask 'Amy, despite the horribly dream she just endured' shouldn't Horribly be Horrible?

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Part Zero | Lost Episode

I immediately got into this one, and I think it's because of the conversation between the two characters. One of the things that kind of got me was all the new terms being thrown at me as the reader without any context as to what they meant, but overall it's a good intro.
I also got a grasp of who SLAM is from how she talked and acted. She seemed ****y and sure of herself, probably overestimating herself a bit too much. It just gave me a good grasp of the character that gave some context to how she acted.
The fight was interesting and I liked the details about SLAM's weapon. It kept my attention and had some actual tension. The enemy had some advantages, but the outcome was still plausible.
Overall it's great and again I enjoyed reading it.
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Part Zero | Lost Script
Since I jumped straight from the last piece to this my attention was already on this, but just reading it this grabbed my attention. It's most certainly different from the last piece which kind of felt a bit odd but since I haven't read much I decided there's a reason that I'll find out.
I like the distinct difference between SLAM and Jak, it's interesting to note the difference between the two, but that's more of a side thing I guess.
From what's written I could guess there was something up with the dirt, thus his evidently magic shovel and the mention of corruption when talking about the ground. I liked the fact the 'Grobber' had an accent that was rather distinct. Overall I enjoyed the entire thing.
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Part Zero (Just overall)
I enjoyed reading it, though at first I had a bit of trouble getting into it. The first part of it got interesting, and then the second part got me quite interested in reading the rest of it. SLAM as a character was quite interesting and the story concerning her was most certainly interesting. The fight was also really interesting and had some real tension that got me truly interested in the outcome of it.
The last part though was quite intriguing and got me interested more in the world then a specific character. It introduced and partially explained some of the things it introduced. I also quite liked Jak and how he was described and how he interacted with the Grobber.
Over all I really enjoyed reading this and I'll get to reading the next part as I can.

Hopefully this proves at least somewhat helpful, apologies if there were any aspects you think I might have overlooked when writing this review of it. If there's any specific kinds of things you want me to mention then I'll gladly add them.

Holy shit there's new chapters!? Why wasn't I informed, I'm the Kaz Miller of this Mother Base!

YOU PLAYED ME LIKE A DAMN FIDDLE!